Saturday, June 13th, 2009 | Author: Mystical
Jessica T asked:
Once upon a time… a young boy was walking through the forest, and he noticed a sign that said “Caution — Do Not Enter”, but the boy entered anyway and was eaten by a rabid grizzly bear.
CHARLOTTE
Once upon a time… a young boy was walking through the forest, and he noticed a sign that said “Caution — Do Not Enter”, but the boy entered anyway and was eaten by a rabid grizzly bear.
CHARLOTTE
Category: History
Monday, 15. June 2009
nope.
lmfao,
here let me help,
Once upon a time, a young boy was walking through the forest. The Boy noticed a sign that said, “Caution — Do Not Enter,” notwithstanding, the boy entered anyway. As a result, he was eaten by a rabid grizzly bear.
[x grammer is everything my friend.
Thursday, 18. June 2009
It’s not really -incorrect- but it’s clumsy. It’s all one sentence, where it could be two or even three.
Also the ellipses after ‘Once upon a time’ is unnecessary.
So it could go like this:
Once upon a time a young boy was walking through the forest. He noticed a sign that said ‘Caution–Do Not Enter’. But the boy entered anyway and was eaten by a rabid grizzly bear.
Same story, just three sentences to separate the ideas.
Sunday, 21. June 2009
Hello!
I have some minor suggestions regarding the punctuation in this passage. Where you have used ellipsis (the three periods), they should be separated by spaces: Once upon a time . . .
Just before a quotation, it’s customary to place a comma: . . . he noticed a sign that said, “Caution . . .”
Finally, punctuation such as a comma should be placed within quotation marks: “. . . Do Not Enter,” but . . .
I’m curious what this passage is for.
–Matt